*   
*
 
*
Home :: Help :: Team :: Members :: Login :: Register
* *
*

+ Finding Serenity  » General Chat  » Kudos/Noteworthy Posts 
|- "Girl in a Box" 
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?

Login with username, password and session length

*
* * *
* *
*


collapse

* Quick Links

* Chat

Refresh History
  • Axe: Well, I am off to bed. 250am here. Hope everyone has a lovely evening/morning
    Today at 09:47:29 AM
  • Desertpuma: Just played my Pathfinder game last night and visited a local convention this past weekend too
    July 19, 2018, 08:41:19 PM
  • Scout: I miss my tabletop campaign, we haven't played in over a month and it looks like we won't until next month at least since everybody's off vacationing all the time
    July 19, 2018, 07:50:10 PM
  • Scout: Good luck!
    July 19, 2018, 07:35:30 PM
  • Axe: PM back to you scout. And now I am off to write up a dnd character that I have to be playing in 3.5 hours XD
    July 19, 2018, 07:27:58 PM
  • Scout: Shiny
    July 19, 2018, 07:23:46 PM
  • Axe: Will read it in a fe wminutes!
    July 19, 2018, 06:56:05 PM
  • Scout: PM for Axe!
    July 19, 2018, 04:07:53 PM
  • Scout: Briar didn't even get to interact with him
    July 18, 2018, 06:43:18 PM
  • Axe: Yeah! For the short time it was active
    July 18, 2018, 06:32:42 PM
  • Scout: Hey, I remember Chris! Wasn't he on the Hound?
    July 18, 2018, 06:16:53 PM
  • Axe: New ship app up for The Revenge! [link]
    July 18, 2018, 01:32:57 AM
  • Rolemancer: Should be posting in Gryphon and Wushu tomorrow.
    July 16, 2018, 01:12:54 AM
  • Helena Cain: [link]
    July 14, 2018, 12:50:50 AM
  • Helena Cain: final poll for the new boat!
    July 14, 2018, 12:50:42 AM
  • Rolemancer: I say logged in.
    July 13, 2018, 10:06:08 PM
  • KateBarton: I was just wondering... anyone ever been able to sign in to the site on the first time? I always have to sign in at least twice...
    July 13, 2018, 07:12:32 PM
  • Axe: Updated ship poll! [link]
    July 13, 2018, 05:09:07 PM
  • Axe: Is it still not working for you?
    July 12, 2018, 08:41:07 PM
  • Axe: I think just you? Though mine seems to be being rather slow.
    July 12, 2018, 08:25:28 PM

* Affiliated Sites

The Verse Online Crusader Citadel Dreaming
TNButton
The Yalanzen Chronicles


Find and vote for us at

Vote for us at
Top RP Sites


Find us on
RPG-DDistant Fantasies




Site Plot

Finding Serenity


Finding Serenity is an original-character roleplay set in Joss Whedon's Firefly 'Verse. Events take place after the events of the Serenity movie.

The year is 2519.

Earth-That-Was is long gone. Humans found a new group of solar systems with dozens of planets and hundreds of moons. The "Core" planets are civilised, high-tech and under Alliance control. The "Border" worlds are diverse and distinct. The "Rim" is the wild west of the 'verse and the "Black" is where our ships travel, hoping to avoid the perils of space: Alliance, pirates, and the monsters known as Reavers.

So here we are, on the "raggedy edge". This is where our characters live. There are those who stick by the Alliance Government, those who want to rise up against it, and those that just don't care either way as long as they can make a living. With every turn, every choice put forward and every decision made we are FINDING SERENITY


Author Topic: "Girl in a Box"  (Read 1641 times)

Description: River Award - What an Entrance.
  • Group Admin Account
  • Jr. Crew
  • Posts: 20
    • View Profile
    • Awards
"Girl in a Box"
« on: February 02, 2013, 01:48:20 AM »
Characters that enter a scene in just such an unforgettable way.

Re: What an Entrance

  • Veteran
  • Crew
  • Posts: 33
  • Awards $5 + donator Artists who have featured Sigs, Banners and other graphics Video editors with featured character or ship videos
    • View Profile
    • Awards
Re: What an Entrance
« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2013, 01:50:25 AM »
Put this one in because I actually have a nominee.

My Kudos goes to Loki (Alex Quinn) for his entrance into the Avalon story - found here


AWARDED!
« Last Edit: April 13, 2014, 04:08:55 AM by Black Betty »

Re: What an Entrance

Alex Quinn
  • Guest
Re: What an Entrance
« Reply #2 on: February 14, 2013, 02:10:59 AM »
Well my goal was to have one character introduced as a naked blue smurf....

Re: What an Entrance

  • Veteran
  • Crew
  • Posts: 26
  • Awards $5 + donator
    • View Profile
    • Awards
Re: What an Entrance
« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2013, 01:00:14 PM »
I just wanted to give kudos to the entire crew of the Restless for doing such a great job on their introductions and entrances. Found here I really feel like everyone has made a memorable entrance and a notable character play.
What if one's greatest fear is that one could be truly extraordinary? What if to avoid fear one avoids the chance of a lifetime?

Re: What an Entrance

  • Administrator
  • Jr. Crew
  • *
  • Posts: 22
  • The Original FS Pirate
  • Awards Video editors with featured character or ship videos
    • View Profile
    • Awards
Re: What an Entrance
« Reply #4 on: August 30, 2013, 09:26:08 PM »
So I think this entrance has just the right amount of explanation of his current situation, some hints to back-story, plenty of character and a nice dose of humour.

“No!” shouted Caber Rowley, as he watched the Stonefly class vessel undock and take off without him. “Wait for me, you gorram ung jeong jia ching jien soh! Wait!” But the ship was already burning up the atmo.

Caber picked up a rock and chucked it in the general direction of the humps that just stranded him. “Not again!” he muttered.

This wasn’t even the second time someone had hired Caber on as a mechanic, got some work out of him, then stranded him at the next dock without his due pay. Caber had even taken to getting his agreements in writing as a means to keep his employers honest, but he couldn’t rightly bring the matter before the law without his own warrants getting him bound.

Now he was stuck on Verbena. He didn’t know anybody on Verbena. He didn’t want to know anybody on Verbena. He very much wanted off Verbena. The only thing Verbena had going for it was a gearshift factory. That thumb had crushed Caber long ago, and he didn’t care to be under it again.

Caber let out an exasperated huff, put his hands on his hips, and looked around at his ridiculous, penniless, go shi situation. He spotted his khaki duffle bag and his large metal tool box unceremoniously chucked on the ground.

“Huh. Well at least they weren’t total bastards about it,” he thought to himself, as he picked up his things.  “And besides…” He dug into his front left pants pocket and pulled out a small, seemingly insignificant stabilizer pin. “They’ll have a helluva time trying to land with their parallactic grav track flopping about.”

Let it not be said that Caber Rowley never learned his lesson.


AWARDED!
« Last Edit: April 13, 2014, 04:09:27 AM by Black Betty »

Re: What an Entrance

  • Veteran
  • Reaver Bait
  • Posts: 9
  • bam-ba-lam
    • View Profile
    • Awards
Re: What an Entrance
« Reply #5 on: September 10, 2013, 06:32:35 PM »
I support this post! :D

So I think this entrance has just the right amount of explanation of his current situation, some hints to back-story, plenty of character and a nice dose of humour.

“No!” shouted Caber Rowley, as he watched the Stonefly class vessel undock and take off without him. “Wait for me, you gorram ung jeong jia ching jien soh! Wait!” But the ship was already burning up the atmo.

Caber picked up a rock and chucked it in the general direction of the humps that just stranded him. “Not again!” he muttered.

This wasn’t even the second time someone had hired Caber on as a mechanic, got some work out of him, then stranded him at the next dock without his due pay. Caber had even taken to getting his agreements in writing as a means to keep his employers honest, but he couldn’t rightly bring the matter before the law without his own warrants getting him bound.

Now he was stuck on Verbena. He didn’t know anybody on Verbena. He didn’t want to know anybody on Verbena. He very much wanted off Verbena. The only thing Verbena had going for it was a gearshift factory. That thumb had crushed Caber long ago, and he didn’t care to be under it again.

Caber let out an exasperated huff, put his hands on his hips, and looked around at his ridiculous, penniless, go shi situation. He spotted his khaki duffle bag and his large metal tool box unceremoniously chucked on the ground.

“Huh. Well at least they weren’t total bastards about it,” he thought to himself, as he picked up his things.  “And besides…” He dug into his front left pants pocket and pulled out a small, seemingly insignificant stabilizer pin. “They’ll have a helluva time trying to land with their parallactic grav track flopping about.”

Let it not be said that Caber Rowley never learned his lesson.

Re: What an Entrance

Re: What an Entrance
« Reply #6 on: October 04, 2013, 06:11:29 PM »
 :-*
" class="bbc_img

Re: What an Entrance

  • Administrator
  • Jr. Crew
  • *
  • Posts: 22
  • The Original FS Pirate
  • Awards Video editors with featured character or ship videos
    • View Profile
    • Awards
Re: What an Entrance
« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2013, 09:31:44 PM »
I've got another new player to nominate for a simple but stellar entrance into the RP. Little details like the cheap cigar, the reference to his history as a smuggler, and small but obvious character traits make this an excellent entrance in my book.

Nick Bradshaw arrives at The Signal, played by edgesteel


AWARDED!
« Last Edit: April 13, 2014, 04:12:23 AM by Black Betty »

Re: "Girl in a Box"

  • Captain
  • Reaver Bait
  • Posts: 7
  • Am I hungry for vengeance? Yeah, I could eat.
  • Awards The Joss
    • View Profile
    • Awards
Re: "Girl in a Box"
« Reply #8 on: April 04, 2014, 12:09:50 AM »
I'd like to nominate Metal Gear Shaco as Sonja in Nautilus. Her entrance wasn't particularly surprising or earth-that-was shattering or funny or anything, but it was just good writing and it made a good impression on me.

We're all pretty good writers here, but MGS's writing style for Sonja in just the few posts we've seen is near pro. It's not overly flowery, or sentimental, or gimmicky, or juvenile and it says a lot with a few words. The best writing style is where you don't notice the style. Like the best acting occurs when you completely forget they're acting. I only noticed because I aspire to such heights and am therefore always on the lookout for it and like to applaud it when I see it. I'm always nervous when people take characters like cooks or passengers, because they may not always have a pivotal role in a plot so it's often up to them to find their way into the mix. I think MGS has the talent to do it. Well done.


AWARDED!
« Last Edit: April 13, 2014, 04:12:43 AM by Black Betty »
" class="bbc_img

Re: "Girl in a Box"

  • Administrator
  • Jr. Crew
  • *
  • Posts: 22
  • The Original FS Pirate
  • Awards Video editors with featured character or ship videos
    • View Profile
    • Awards
Re: "Girl in a Box"
« Reply #9 on: May 11, 2018, 10:00:23 PM »
I'm nominating this for the little details in it that speak so loudly about the character. From the messenger bag lifted over the head to the withering glare that didn't work because of her brown doe eyes I just loved the subtlties that brought so much life from the page.

Jolene, played by Carrie Bowman, walks into a bar

AWARDED!
« Last Edit: May 11, 2018, 10:05:31 PM by PurpleRiver »

 

*
* * *
*
*